Virtual game with dating
The problem is that a perfect stranger they meet at a sex club should not be breaking the news, even though it makes sense that there would be a lot of sex experts at a sex club.The fix I came up with is 1.) for the three branches at the sex club to be one long branch, and 2.) to have Lydia make the reveal.It is much better with someone they know breaking the news.There is a bonus reason 3.) The story comes full circle as part 5 chapter 3 feels like a repeat of part 2.
Parts 2, 3, and the first draft of part 4 were released last winter when I had a lot of time on my hands. You might want to read the whole story or at least the ending before scrolling down and reading spoilers. I spent the good part of this last year trying to rewrite part 4, and failing miserably.Two traits I originally imagined for Ariane, being a science geek and a secret supermodel, never came to fruition, so I gave those traits to Rachel.I also got a comment once from a vegetarian player of Date Ariane, wondering why she was such a big meat eater, the comment inspired me to make Rachel a vegetarian.But the biggest trait of Ariane is that she is didn’t involve sex.There was nudity at the dress shop and at her private photo studio, and at the house party though she didn’t get naked herself.